Additamenta
Notes on peripheral
work for the project on “poetry of the 1970s”.
John Smith. It was
necessary to read Smith because he was made a Poetry Book Society
choice twice, in 1958 and 1973, and this is probably unique. I
started with Entering Rooms (1973), which includes the poem
'The Prologue'. This describes someone entering a featureless white
room and being unable to detect small features because the white
blanks out differences. So the human is in an artificial environment,
one where all information is withheld and has to be acquired by
sensory exploration.
Curiously
enough you will at first refrain from touching it
Though
unaware of the reason. You will kneel down
And
gaze upon it for a long time. Because there are no shadows
You
will not at once discover that it possesses a small groove
Encircling
it some one and a half inches from the top.
Not
until you touch it with your fingers will you know this.
So
it may be a box, a box with no fastener.
However
the lid, if it is a lid, refuses to lift
Though
refusal, for such an inanimate block,
is a word
Too
human and personal, say rather it will not move.
Therefore
it may merely be a solid cube of wood.
This is intriguing,
although it is striking that he has devised a white cube without
connecting to the “white cube” which was so much discussed in
avant garde art. My guess is that this is a significant poem but
Smith has not gone through that door into real mystery and the
unknown because he felt alone, he was not in contact with a community
of experimental writers who would have both competed with him and
encouraged him to go beyond. It is not a great poem, because its real
charge is conceptual but it is weighed down by a literal description
of the space, which discourages us from conceptual exploration. My
feeling about the book is that he went into the unknown but came back
too quickly. I certainly liked that poem. It reminds me of 'The Cut
Pages', by Roy Fisher.
I looked also at
Excursus in Autumn
(1958). The wrapper has a design deriving from the “Festival Design
Group”, using physical forms acquired from looking through a
microscope– compelling for me. It looks like a textile print. The text around it has familiar themes
from the 1950s reaction – the poet is meritorious because he has
abandoned modernity and thinking about ideas and has no ambition. So
much for the sales tactics! You shouldn’t swallow these, and indeed
Smith offers us an 18-part poem on the life of the Buddha which
hardly fits into 1950s-style restrictions. He wasn't in revolt –
but he also hadn't taken on the cultural politics of the 1950s, he
isn't using the set themes of the time, the clichés
of the academic poets born in the 1920s. JS was born in 1924, and this was already his fourth book (omitting one early one).
In 1990 he published a book or pamphlet, 'For Paul Klee'. Depressing
in a way – I mean that, if he had accepted in 1948 that poetry had to
be MODERN in the same way that Paul Klee's art was MODERN, he might
have been a more powerful poet (even if the conservatives around him
would have made his life hell). Further – Klee was a generation
older than him, the classic formulation would be to get with art
which is totally modern and also from your generation, your
contemporaries. There is a poem, already in 1958, about a Klee etching:
Now see: two
mandarins in this desert meet
Naked and bald as
coots; their spindle-shanks
Spider the sand with
flat and horny feet;
A scrubby hair
spouts from their scrawny flanks.
Who could suppose
that scarecrow shapes like these
Would court such
ceremonial niceties
As to consider their
respective ranks?
This isn’t bad,
but it's so conventional compared to Klee even though he is providing
the subject matter (which is two people meeting when each thinks that
the other is of higher rank). The ability to make an argument in
tight verse is astounding, I don't think people can do that any more.
John Holloway or Roy Fuller could do that. I think “formalist” is
the word, and as Homberger says this was on the way out by 1964. The book also includes 'Winter Morning':
The razors of the wind have shaved the sky
To apple brightness of astringent green
And on that glass rock-crystal geese are strung
Frozen like sharp stars necklacing the sun
Till midday melts the wires on which they hang
And to the swan-white woods they squawk and fly.
The razors of the wind have shaved the sky
To apple brightness of astringent green
And on that glass rock-crystal geese are strung
Frozen like sharp stars necklacing the sun
Till midday melts the wires on which they hang
And to the swan-white woods they squawk and fly.
Well,
this is good. We can't deny that. It has the qualities
of decorum and repressed tension you look for in Fifties
poetry. but it doesn’t suggest something great. I don't want to
push Smith back out of history, but this isn't going to rewrite the
story of that Twenties-born
generation.
The symmetry of the verse gives it a serenity which poetry no longer
has – the impersonality fixes it into position. The love poems
don't attempt wisdom and this gives them a vulnerability. The serene
framework gives us a serene view of uncertainty, frustration,
vulnerability. The framework doesn’t have to shake because the
subject is excited. The love has a reality outside the person feeling
it. This may be
because it can have a life longer than the short time frame of
self-consciousness. Love songs of the era before rock and roll are
out of fashion but they still bear listening to. There was a selected
poems (1948 to 82) which includes a long poem, new in 1982, in what
looks like a formalist and avant garde style. I only got a brief look
at this, it looked original, witty, but not a game changer.
He was a literary
agent. This meant he was making money for writers. He was also editor
of Poetry Review for two or three years, and no doubt
published a lot of poets. This kind of thing makes you friends. I
think this goes some way to explain his double victory with the PBS
panel. I am not saying that the books aren't worth reading, rather
that they aren’t triumphs and we don't have to rewrite history to
accommodate them. He doesn’t feature in the anthologies and this is
a wrong outcome – you can’t simply rely on the anthologies and a
mainstream anthology may not capture all the good mainstream poets.
I also read
'Artorius', by John Heath-Stubbs. I read at least one review when
this came out, in 1973, and have managed to spend 45 years avoiding
it. But finally, I read it. It is almost as bad as I expected. It is
not going in my list of “long poems of the 1970s”. It is
difficult to rehabilitate Heath-Stubbs – Jim Keery included a poem
of his in JK's (as yet unpublished) Apocalypse. An Anthology which I
rather liked. Working out why someone didn't write well involves too
many unknown quantities – but Heath-Stubbs was gay and unable to
write frankly about his feelings – and too culturally conservative
to put real energy into a revolt against social and stylistic norms.
Myth, specifically Christian myth, was the most likely path for him
to write about his deepest concerns in a linguistic pattern distanced
and ornate enough to disguise the personal origins. He did write
about myths and saints, quite a lot. But myth was so much the special
subject of the Apocalyptics, and he felt so trapped as a conservative
of a generation which was swept away by aggressive conservatives in
the early Fifties, that this promising solution area was fraught with
powerful inhibitions (and not able to offer a release from
inhibitions). George Barker was his natural model (and the collected
is dedicated to him with “homage”), but the chances of him
writing barkerian poetry were blocked off behind mine-fields and
marshes. He was not a courageous writer. His natural bent was to
regress to the 19th century, not to take on the 20th
with its alarming demands for frankness, sincerity, and
individuality. He was forthright in conversation, there is that
famous anecdote of him saying to Martin Seymour-Smith “I am a
Christian, a homosexual and a poet”, while the vessel with the
dinner in it heated up and exploded. If he had written poetry about
the validity of being a Christian homosexual, it could have been
great poetry, but of course he never did that. I can't really write
about him as a gay poet because he had walled it off too
successfully. (Martin was there with someone, can’t now remember who.)
The poem in
'Apocalypse. An Anthology' is 'The Hill', published 1946:
All night long in
the garden under the cypresses
I heard the song of
the childish dead, chirping
With black dried
lips, like crickets in the beams,
And the silence of
the stream whose watery tongue is gone.
But now with a sound
of trumpets
The sun, of golden
feathers, beating his wings
Through the granular
ether, out of his eastern cave
Of darkness comes –
a bird, whose iron beak
Is pointed at my dry
and singing brain.
And so early in the
morning I climb to this hill
Islanded in blue
intense of the circling air,
Hearing only the
long melancholy line of the shepherd’s piping
Or calling to his
dog down there in the valley.
I couldn't work out what the plot of this poem is, it sounds like part of the New Testament but the pattern has been broken up and re-fitted wrongly. The early poems at
around pages 219 to 330 of the Collected are worth thinking about.
Not 'Artorius'. Those poems are apparently based on known myths but
are also unparaphrasable – the plots go wrong. The obscurity
provides a vague area in which original events can emerge, protected by half-light. It is as
if we had a collection of Classical paintings of saints being
martyred and Greek gods doing various extreme things, in exotic
landscapes, and they were being subtly repainted, not to get rid of
the naked bodies and the extreme experiences, but to change the story
and make it even less natural. But also – the poem fits perfectly
into Apocalypse. An Anthology and Heath-Stubbs' repeated and
petulant cry that he had nothing to do with them is denying what
everyone else can see. Anxiety and obscurity fight their way to centre stage and the rest is hidden behind them.
Francis King's autobiography has an anecdote about Oxford poets circa 1945. John Lehmann, the most influential publisher of new literature, was visiting Oxford, and asked for a young poet to stay in the same house with him to act as guide. Lehmann was owed a lot of favours and liked to spread his favours around. The top boys had a meeting to deal with this, and the solution found was to offer Heath-Stubbs. Even Lehmann wouldn't make a pass at him, he wasn't good-looking enough.
Francis King's autobiography has an anecdote about Oxford poets circa 1945. John Lehmann, the most influential publisher of new literature, was visiting Oxford, and asked for a young poet to stay in the same house with him to act as guide. Lehmann was owed a lot of favours and liked to spread his favours around. The top boys had a meeting to deal with this, and the solution found was to offer Heath-Stubbs. Even Lehmann wouldn't make a pass at him, he wasn't good-looking enough.
The book I wrote
about the 1970s filled up and material got squeezed out. Some of the
most neglected material was part of this, so it is going to stay
neglected. Let me just mention 'Lusus', by George MacBeth – some of
his best work.
B.C. Leale (1930-2018) seems to have engaged
intensively
in poetry but did not publish a book until 1984, when
two came out –Leviathan
and
The Colours
of Ancient Dreams. He published in many magazines – 40 are credited in Leviathan. A
New
and Selected Poems is said to be
in preparation, but no actual books have appeared since 1984. I came across his name in a review by Peter Porter –
I was going through all his reviews in the on-line archive of The
Observer. Leale was part of The Group in the Sixties and Porter
evidently knew him. I say this because Leale does not seem to crop up
in any of the anthologies. (An exception is the Group
anthology, in the Sixties.) Leale emphatically belongs with the
terse, high-energy, and even violent poets. Leviathan is named for a poem about a
whale which ends the book:
holy
oil burning on the rim of night
baleful
eye we would banish
down
a forgotten hatchway
a
cachalot engraved on paper
[…]
flailing
white foundry rounding
on
earth's emptiness
ivory
nail scarring
the
dark slate of the eternal.
The
word appears again:
Hotels
Royal, Imperial, Grand –
stranded
leviathans drying out
at
the city’s dead centre.
Furs,
confections of feathers,
so
gracefully taken,
jammed
on hooks.
(‘Lost
Worlds’)
The
aesthetic is fairly obvious. The language is cut right down to allow
primal and violent processes to emerge, and the main goal is to be
kinetic. At page 49 we have two poems, one 20 words long and one 22 words long. Leale almost patented the one-word line. Ethics and psychological nuances are cut away – the
objects or impact traces have to speak for themselves. This is not
exactly unknown in the Sixties, but if Hughes, Harsent and MacBeth were so
successful doing it, and coming out with ‘shots’ which had the
impact of action cinema or advertisements, it was something the era wanted. Leale had realised the logic of the kinetic, startlingly so, and it is hard to see why
he did not achieve a reputation. These poems have an instantaneous hit, even if that involves a touch of the perverse and the
violent. They simply have a modern aesthetic. Take this account of a
musician:
Goes
out for a snack
or
to write up his memoirs
or
to crash the barriers of sound
in
a jet that feathers down to Africa.
He
hunts the last of
visible
wildnotes in the life-mask
of
Stravinsky or merely
finds
a locked room
in
which he's sitting
in
Paris in London in New York:
bullet/bone shield/brain high-pitched shearing/dismembering.
Heifetz
listens at a lager glass
to
a pacific
whisper
of foam.
(‘Visible
Wildnotes’)
This
reminds me of Jeremy Reed. The poem catches people in brief, shrill,
instants; but that is not necessarily to delete their characters,
rather their unavowed passions are caught as if by a light that cuts
through flesh and cultural defences. The belief in the kinetic leads to the damage associated with high speed – a way of generating form. The passage a street
of speed-/vibrated faces
seems to encapsulate his view of the world – the special world
visible when moving at speed. He had a photographer's eye but was more interested in motion than in a still moment.
Colours
is a collection of surrealist poems – hard-hitting but somehow
academic. I can't really explain their lack of impact, perhaps it is
due to habituation on my part. Even the cover looks like dada graphics of the 1920s rather than graphics of today. The proposal to publish two books in
one year involved differentiation, so this differs from Leviathan
even if the poems in that book are closely related to Colours.
It includes the poem "Fouquet’s”:
tweezerings
of iced
volcanoes.
Tumbrils whirl. Delicate
lit
spindles. At Fouquet’s you replace your glass
excessively
(a gramme of strength
gone
from you). It’s charged with a pale deluge
of
sipped grape. The imagination's Venice
crusted
in snow.
The
Piazza brimming with an unspilt light.
The
sky’s gondola riding a harbour of stars.
You
step into the street drilled by its
rough
lexical strata.
Also,
what seems to be a text found by cutting-up a Barbara Cartland novel:
The
Duke walked through the shrubs holding his
big
Balls and Receptions right on the edge of the sea.
Anoushka
looked up at him, her eye no longer
propped
against the side of the balcony.
Their
kiss took a long time while the Duke
paid
some of his tailor's bills
Under
a glass sky (1975?)) is described by a bookseller as “concrete
Poetry”. This would correlate, as most surrealist poets in the 70s
surely did concrete work as well. But booksellers are not tied down
by mere fact.
Porter
said about Colours: "Smiles, cameras, glass, blood, murder,
Paris and composers dominate this book. There are lots of good jokes
but some fine seriousness as well." I am relieved that Porter also finds the surrealist poems academic (he says "quirky, old-fashioned look").
And
about Leviathan: His ideal miniature would be a grenade and language
for him is certainly booby-trapped. Porter quotes an entire poem,
‘Der Heiligenschein’:
The
aura around his head on the dewy grass
the
observer stooped down to & gingerly picked
wrought
of strong sunlight & water
and
put it into his briefcase
without
a
spilt
drop
an
excess of virtue carried
through
subways furtively
as
if he had robbed heaven.
(The
title means ‘halo’.)
Leale belongs to a moment of the immediate present which I associate with the halcyon period 1965-74. He seems uninterested in his own personality, certainly in his social position, uninterested by the past. The kinetic objects of his poems are speeding through the exit from their own past. For this reason it is difficult to wrap him in some kind of cultural nostalgia. I just don't understand why his poetry has disappeared from view.
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